Rough cut of video

'American Dream' Rough cut from Daniel Jeffery on Vimeo.

Teachers Comments:


- The camera is being moved to much during the filming it should stay still in certain areas of the footage.



- The main actor touches his head too much it is something that is too noticeable to the audience.



- Some areas of the video need to have more cuts and the editing needs to be at a quicker pace.



- Too many shots of the main actors back and there should be more shots of his face and where he is facing the camera.